![]() One last thing I need to comment on is the book's general plot development and the ending. ![]() While the proofreading wasn't as bad as it could be, after I've come to experience many other independently published works, it wasn't perfect either. Out of all characters I found the sidekick quite predictable, the antagonists/villains were neither original nor exciting and the rest just sort of existed, so the main story could develop. After having read this first book I have to conclude that the premise wasn't as interesting as I had hoped it would be. Some human being reborn as a sentient dungeon in an rpg-like world I hadn't ever heard or read about a plot-device like this and it sounds quite ridiculous at first, but it drew me to this story and made me stick with it until the end. ![]()
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